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sherlock
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nottingham
United Kingdom


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Posted - 22/10/2017 :  16:10:49  Show Profile Send sherlock a Private Message  Reply with Quote
I was on Poets of Google and saw a challenge to write a short three words per line poem. I came up with this one.Can YOU write one? Go on, have a go...
.JUST THREE WORDS

He watched her
Small and trim
As they walked
The crater’s rim
No words said
Just tender smile
A gentle nod
Then stopped awhile
Their awkward talk
With lowered eyes
Blush of cheek
And inward sighs
Atop he crater
There they stayed
From such things
Are friendships made

© Don Holmes

Rob Carson
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carlisle
United Kingdom


251 Posts

Posted - 26/10/2017 :  14:39:05  Show Profile Send Rob Carson a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Quite an good discipline for writing a simple, effective poem. A euphonious read, I thought...
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Rob Carson
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carlisle
United Kingdom


251 Posts

Posted - 26/10/2017 :  19:18:42  Show Profile Send Rob Carson a Private Message  Reply with Quote
...'an' good isn't the best of English. Typo, let's say...
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