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janhedger
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Posted - 01/04/2012 :  23:29:45  Show Profile  Visit janhedger's Homepage  Send janhedger an AOL message Send janhedger a Private Message  Reply with Quote
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I admire your use of old language Richard with another of April 1st comparable poems - looking at things in a different context. Yor structure is sound!
Jan
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SapperG
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Posted - 02/04/2012 :  01:36:46  Show Profile Send SapperG a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Hello Jan,
I thought my language was still relevant, have I aged that much :)
I have often wished that I had the skill of the 'Romantic' poets in composing a Sonnet. Sadly I am just a cheap imitation, as I have previously mentioned, a sort of "Byron get one free"
Thank you for 'YORE' kind words,
God Bless my dear Jan
Richard
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