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Peter Southern
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Corby
United Kingdom
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 Posted - 08/03/2010 : 20:18:36
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Hope this works. It is my first submission.
I joined about a year ago, and moved house right after.
Only now getting back to some kind of routine.
Normally write prose, so this is something new for me.
Cheers,
John Donnelly (Wally.)
http://www.forcespoetry.com/poemdetails.asp?ID=2696
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janhedger
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United Kingdom
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Posted - 08/03/2010 : 22:11:04
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Another prose writer, testing the water of poetry! I adore this poem, from a different perspective, very clever! Welcome back John! Pure class! Hope you have settled in new house okay!
Jan |
'On CalicoWings'
http://www.silverwoodbooks.co.uk
http://www.janscreativewriting.co.uk - updated August 10! Please drop in!
“Do all the good you can, by all the means you can, in all the ways you can, in all the places you can, at all the times you can, to all the people you can, as long
as ever you can.”
John Wesley
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taffy
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Oswestry Shropshire.
United Kingdom
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Posted - 09/03/2010 : 10:24:35
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| Hello and welcome back, a poem well thought out, a new angle to an old problem, well written, First effort? first class. More please. taffy |
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Their War: Our Fight - John Donnelly
