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Peter Southern
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sherlock
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nottingham
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 Posted - 01/03/2010 : 10:31:16
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| I agrre with Peter- very moving . I don't usually well up at 10.30 on a monday morning but this poem succeeded in making me. Well done Tom |
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janhedger
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Posted - 01/03/2010 : 11:41:53
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The moment of passing on is beautifully captured in your poem Tom.
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taffy
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Oswestry Shropshire.
United Kingdom
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Posted - 01/03/2010 : 11:45:10
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| Hello, This poem really hit me hard, having just gone through almost identical days recently when my wife died. Am unable to write about it yet, but i will Gwen told me to. taffy |
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Kale
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Posted - 02/03/2010 : 07:14:28
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Oh Tom... washing machine eyes for me, such a beautiful well versed poem, so moving and touching. What a tender way to portray the last moments on earth, peaceful and calm... perfect.
Thank you Tom for sharing.
Love and hugs to you and Paula
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Sland
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Edinburgh
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Posted - 02/03/2010 : 18:12:09
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| Beautifully written Tom. |
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Departing Wish Tom Mcgreevy
